The Meeting - Pitch

After a long day of development work and changing around ideas, I have come up with a 24 word pitch that my 10 minute short film script will be based around.

Pitch:

''A dramatic story about a naive young teen, determined to meet his biological father. But will it all crash when the two opposites collide?''

After discussing my pitch with the class I am happy with my pitch so far, it doesn't give too much away about the story and leaves the audience questioning what could happen and what the change could be in the story.