''Soft'' Pitch

Soft - Simon Ellis (2006)

After watching a short film called 'Soft' directed by Simon Ellis, we had to create a 25 word pitch that would be able to entice an audience into watching the short film, whilst not giving too much away.

As a group we first discussed short snappy words which could explain the short film. We chose words and sentences such as; dramatically, modern day drama, relationship, hard-hitting, events, intensity etc.

Here is the pitch I came up with after watching and analysing the short film.

''A hard hitting modern drama between a father and son, who's relationship dramatically changes after a period of events occurs in a small town.''

After discussing this with Simon and the class, we agreed that my pitch was a bit too wordy and could of used a question at the end to encourage the audience to wonder what could happen.